
Over the weekend news traveled quickly of Kobe Bryant’s untimely death and the heart-wrenching revelation that his 13 year old daughter died with him. I’m not a huge basketball fan, but I knew my students would come Monday talking about this tragedy. So when I saw Sara Ahmed’s tweet, I took notice.
I copied Kobe’s poem Dear Basketball. We talked about Kobe, about the accident, and read aloud the poem. Later in the day, I saw a Facebook post of this video, so my last class watched the video as well.
As a writing prompt, I told my students they could write a letter to something they love or write a letter to Kobe from his basketball. This prompt worked especially well with my boys. I want to share three of my students’ poems.
Dear Kobe
From the first time you made me
from a ball of socks
and threw me into a hoop,I knew that you would become
one of the greatest.
I knew that you dreamt of being one of the greatest,
by how you put your heart and soul
into me,
day and night,
never resting.
You put your blood, sweat,
and tears into me.You worked day and night,
making shot after shot
after shot after shot,
until you were finally able
to put on that Lakers jersey
with me in your hand,
doing the thing you love the most.I am grateful for all the
years we spent together,
but as you grow older,
your body isn’t into
running up and down the
court,
throwing the ball into the
hoop,
but I know your heart
will always be with me
forever and ever.From Basketball
Shaelon, 6th grade
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Dear Kobe,
While you pretended
to make game-winning shots,
I knew one thing:I was meant for you.
Loving me,
giving me your hardest.You saw me as a kid,
and you came running to me,
never turning back.I asked for a little,
you gave me a lot.While I called to you,
and you practiced for me,
coming my way.The way of a legend.
But dreams
can’t last forever.Not all at least.
You stayed with me,
and I stayed with you.I stayed in your heart,
as you threw me in the trash,
and I knew,
you would come,
and get me out.The trash,
was just your basket,
and our way of staying
together.Always.
Love you,
Basketball
A.J., 6th grade
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Dear green pen,
From the moment
I took you out of the bag
and started writing poems in a notebook
that is full of blue loose leaf,I fell in fondness of you
I used you with my wrist to my fingers
A 12 year old boy
deeply in fondness of you
I never saw the end of the sentence
I only saw words
and so I wrote
I wrote up and down every page
after every sentence
you asked for my poems
I gave you my essays
because they are bigger.
I wrote through every cramp
not because I wanted to
but because my teacher made meyou gave this 12 year old boy a writing dream
and I am fond of you for that
but I can’t write for much longermy teacher has to leave
school is almost overI’m ready to put you back in the bag
and no matter what I write
I will always be that kid
with the pen in hand
notebook on the table
5 seconds left on the timer5 …4 …3 …2 …1…0 and then the timer goes off
and the pen starts going back in the bag.
Fond of you always,-Landon
Landon, 6th grade
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Margaret, this is beautiful. I love that you shared this poem. I didn’t know it existed. I’m sharing with my teacher friends! Your student responses are incredible! I’m partial to the green pen, myself. But, each is wonderful!
I wish you could’ve heard Landon read The Green Pen. We were all laughing out loud. And it was a huge score for him in writing!
Just… wow! What an incredible prompt, what a way to honor your students’ interests and to encourage an awareness of and connection to the world around them. And what great poems. Thanks for sharing!
Mercy.
Choice
Voice
Honoring students!
❤
This is a precious post. Thank you so much for sharing!
Wow…your student’s stories are incredible. You truly inspired them! 🙂
There’s so many reasons to love Kobe’s poem – a man, writing from the heart, not just about his passion, but to it – a basketball legend, a man so many boys want to emulate, crafting poetry, so beautifully. Great writing always has a ripple effect, as clearly seen in the work of your students. Writing is all about the connection of one mind and heart to another. A profound connection. And, in this case, a beautiful memorial.
Fabulous post, Margaret! All of the poems are wonderful (of course I have a soft spot for Green Pen) and the teacher planning behind them is inspirational.