Laura Purdie Salas has been a writing mentor in my classroom for years now. Her books and poetry speak to children ( and to this adult). A few weeks ago she posted this poem on her blog. I used it with my students for a beginning-of-the-school-year writing prompt. I did not require the precise rhyme and rhythm pattern; they got the gist of making a list of favorite things.
I, however, took on the challenge of getting into the right meter and rhyme-scheme. I don’t think I’ve nailed it (I’m missing a verse and one of the rhymes is too slanted) but each revision gets closer to it. Rodgers and Hammerstein were musical geniuses. I played a video of this favorite scene from The Sound of Music, a classic that many children are unfamiliar with. They know this version better–the Lays commercial with Anna Kendrick. It’s fun to watch, too.
Reflections on the Teche 
Oh, you are both so clever. Loving that ‘Blue topaz gemstone on top of my ring.’ and ‘Three darling girls from my years as a Mrs.’ – and that spider line. Such delightful turns of phrase! (And is that your photo, too? It’s perfect!)
This is delightful! I can’t help but sing along with your poem in my mind as I read it. I love those lines that Kat highlighted as well. Thanks for sharing this today.
On a recent vacation I got to spend some time with a nine month old and so totally relate to your poem, Margaret, and the joy you feel with your grandkids. You and Laura have made clever use of this lyric, one of my favorites.
“When the storm comes, when the wind blows” has extra significance in your poem. I loved Laura’s poem, which I had read recently. And then to see yours so well-executed was another treat. What a gem. Beautiful.
Such a fun poem, Margaret! I think I’ll have to try this one. I have a blue topaz ring also. It is my most complimented piece of jewelry.
OK, I cannot read this…I have to sing it. So fun, and personal and true! What a great prompt and resulting poem.
Yes, I loved Laura’s poem, too, Margaret, & love that you sneaked the daughters & the grand into your favorite things! I’ve never seen that Lays commercial, very cute. I imagine your students loved this prompt! Have a great weekend!
Your poem is a homage to Rogers & Hammerstein, Margaret, but you give it your personal touch. I think I’ve also seen this done as an ‘opposite’ poem where the list like structure and rhyme are used to present things that are not favoured by the poet. Thanks for the insight.
What a darling little exercise, Margaret! Very fun to sing along and your kisses/Mrs. rhyme is inspired!
What a fun poem! I love “to these young voices I wish I could cling.” My sentiments exactly!
VERY fun! I love “three darling girls from my years as a Mrs.”
PS — that Lays commercial!!! Oh. My. Goodness. Parody at its BEST.
Margaret, this is a joyous poem on this Sunday morning. I love that you snuck in Mamere ( I am sure you love the sound of that word). Thanks for the fine opening of my day.
You should hear Leo say it. He has a bit of a southern twang.
This is a great idea – I may try it with my kids. I love yours and Laura’s too! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
Oh my goodness, Margaret, I don’t know how I missed this when you posted it. This is just so lovely. I really like your appreciation for the things in the moment and your yearning that they could remain the same. It’s such a bittersweet celebration of all the beauty and love life has to offer. Brava! I’m honored that reading my poem inspired yours. The circle of inspiration widens…