
On Saturday, I toured the Audubon Aquarium at the fast pace of a 5-year old. This penguin was right up against the glass as if it was posing.
I invite you to write a penguin poem. Join us in the comments and support other writers with your comments.
Today I decided to write a Zeno poem. It’s a mathematical form created by J. Patrick Lewis using the sequence 8, 4, 2, 1, 4, 2, 1, 4, 2, 1. Each one syllable line rhymes. When I decide to use this form, I start with the rhyming word. For this poem I wanted it to land on the word fly. I made a list of words that rhyme with fly (cry, spy, by, guy, high,…) Then I wrote the numbers down the left side of the page.
Next, compose a first sentence. You’d be surprised how many sentences are between 8-10 syllables.
Zenos are fun to write. Mine came out quite silly, but I feel like that’s the point.
Mr. Penguin invites you in—
the water is
fresh as
pie.
That fishy scent
by and
by.
Secret power
makes him
fly.






Margaret, I love imagining you running through the aquarium at a five-year-old pace. You zeno is so fun. Thanks for sharing your process. I love the singsong of your poem, and silly does seem the point. I’ll try one, but today, I got lost in reading about penguins.
Penguins! So many kinds! King and Royal,
Emperor, Erect-crested, Adélie and African,
Northern and Southern Rockhoppers, Chinstrap, and Little,
Galápagos and Gentoo, Magellanic and Macaroni.
Until today, I hadn’t realized penguins
Inhabit our world at the impressive
Nineteen diverse species. More:
Snares, Yellow-eyed, White-flippered, Humboldt, and Fiordland
Denise, thanks for writing today. I had no idea there were so many types of penguins. When I looked up this one, it’s an African and is able to adapt to a temperate environment. I considered an acrostic too. With all those penguins, you could do an abcedarian. Forms help when trying to contain a topic.