
Last week this lily appeared at my back door. I vaguely remember a neighbor giving me some bulbs, but I planted them ages ago. When I placed my Google lens on this flower, surprise lily came up as one of many names. It’s also known as spider lily and naked lady. Today in my poem I am focused on the surprise.
Surprise!
a ribbon
burst from soil
on a stemmed gift
lily
Margaret Simon, draft
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I love the name Surprise Lily. It certainly bursts from the soil. The whole idea makes me think of fireworks.
Fireworks
of floral .
Ribbon arms
explode
and fade
with pops
of pollen.
Surprise!
Lily for a burst
of Autumn.
I like how you used fireworks and words like explode and pops.
Hurricane lily bc it flowers in hard hurricane season here
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I was overdue
for such a joyous surprise.
More of the same, please!
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