
This month I challenged my writing partners, the Sunday Night Swaggers, to write zeno poems. This fun form was created by J. Patrick Lewis and is based on a mathematical sequence of 8,4,2,1,4,2,1,4,2,1 with each 1 syllable line rhyming. This is one of my favorite forms to use with children. The syllable count is doable, and there’s the added challenge of rhyme.
Even though the temperature hasn’t changed (we have highs in the mid 90’s still.), the signs of fall are here: shorter days, browning cypress, and high sugarcane.
Sugarcane is taller than me.
Margaret Simon, draft
Tangled green stalks
above
rise
reaching for fall’s
azure
skies
field of beauty
in my
eyes.
Autumn sounds like a sad songbird
Margaret Simon, draft
singing under
grapevine
shade
where blossoms from
springtime
fade
empty bird’s nest
hidden
grayed.

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