In Dictionary for a Better World, Charles Waters writes about Courage using a cinquain form. “Sometimes courage can be…” The form is simple: five lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. Sometimes these simple forms open up possibilities for writing that we wouldn’t normally explore.
I’m listening to The Book of Hope with Jane Goodall and Douglas Abrams. I explored the topic with a cinquain to model for my students.
Sometimes
Brayden, 3rd grade
poetry
is hiding in plain sight
you can find poetry in your mind
look hard
I’m always filled with hope when I see a rainbow, Margaret. And your students continue to amaze me.
I am a big lover in the benefits of short form poetry, Margaret. (And I’ve often wondered about the ‘rules’ for the American cinquain form. Now I know.🙃) Hope is beautiful!
Whenever I read your process–I always want to try it immediately! And, how cool that you connected this form that kids learn to such a wise and amazing woman such as Goodall. “trust my own heart” is perfect–can I do that? I think about that as I read.
Both you & Brayden write poems of hope, Margaret. I guess we just must settle in to wait & watch! Have a lovely weekend!
You and Brayden have made my heart so happy today!
Margaret, Brayden certainly is right about finding poetry. You bring out the best in your students. Trust your heart and hope-what great guidelines for life.
Both of these poems! I wonder about rainbows as well. And young, Brayden, wow, an old soul.