Spring break is here, and I am on retreat. My good friend Jen owns a cottage in Breaux Bridge, Bonne Terre Cottage, and she invited me to come stay as long as I want. Her generous spirit has led me to the “good earth.” Up early, watching the birds, listening to sounds of nature led to a mondo, a form of haiku that is a call and response. My friend and fellow writer Chere Coen is sitting on the porch with her camera, ready to capture whatever bird will let her. I took pictures with my phone and used Overgram to create the image-poem.
Archive for the ‘Poetry’ Category
Retreat Mondo
Posted in Poetry, Slice of Life, tagged Bonne Terre Cottage, Chere' Coen, haiku, mondo, Overgram on April 22, 2014| 7 Comments »
Monday Lune
Posted in Poetry, tagged ABCs of poetry, American haiku, lune, Robert Kelly on April 21, 2014| 4 Comments »
My adventure into poetry forms continues. Today, I am writing a lune. I found this definition of a lune on EdHelper.
“The lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It’s similar to the popular haiku form of poetry. While a haiku follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern, the lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Typically, since the middle line is restricted to three syllables, it is the shortest line of the three. This gives the lune a curve on the ends similar to a crescent moon.
The lune was invented by poet Robert Kelly in the 1960s. Kelly has been a professor of literature at Bard College in Annandale-on-Hudson, New York, since 1986. He is the author of numerous poems and short fiction. When he invented the lune, he wanted poets to have freedom of choice. Therefore, the lune can be about anything, unlike the haiku, which is expected to be about nature.”
On a drive near my school which is out in the country, I stopped and took some snapshots of the landscape. The picture has nothing to do with the poem. It’s just pretty. The poem came to me while I was listening to a feature on the news about deafness and cochlear implants. Go figure? I never know when the muse will strike.
Progressive Poem
Posted in Poetry, Writing, tagged Irene Latham, Live your Poem, Progressive poem on April 17, 2014| 10 Comments »
I have been anxiously awaiting this day when the Progressive poem would head my way. As I watched the poem progress, I worried about the meter and rhyme. This poem had form and sometimes form can be intimidating. But this group of poets are anything but intimidating. I started participating in the kidlit Poetry Friday group over a year ago and have felt warmth, welcome, and encouragement. Pardon me while I get preachy. A collaborative project is not about you, the individual. It is about the product of the whole. It’s about being present and showing up when it’s your turn. Like being one voice in a chorus, you must blend in and fade out. I took this call seriously, so my line is not a punchline. It is not a Wow line. But I feel it belongs in this poem with this group of words. Carry on, Irene. I pass the baton on to the master, the creator, our leader, and our friend, Irene Latham at Live your Poem.
Sitting on a rock, airing out my feelings to the universe
Acting like a peacock, only making matters that much worse;Should I trumpet like an elephant emoting to the moon,
Or just ignore the warnings written in the rune?Those stars can’t seal my future; it’s not inscribed in stone.
The possibilities are endless! Who could have known?Gathering courage, spiral like an eagle after prey
Then gird my wings for whirlwind gales in realms far, far away.But, hold it! Let’s get practical! What’s needed before I go?
Time to be tactical— I’ll ask my friends what I should stow.And in one breath, a honeyed word whispered low— dreams —
Whose voice? I turned to see. I was shocked. Irene’s“Each voyage starts with tattered maps; your dreams dance on this page.
Determine these dreams—then breathe them! Engage your inner sage.”The merry hen said, “Take my sapphire eggs to charm your host.”
I tuck them close – still warm – then take my first step toward the coast.This journey will not make me rich, and yet I long to be
Backyard Amaryllis
Posted in Poetry, Writing, tagged amaryllis, Haiku Deck, katauta, Sarah Hazel on April 16, 2014| 2 Comments »
My friend, Sarah Hazel, is an artist. She created this beautiful painting yesterday and posted it on her blog (I love her blog title!) Finding my Glasses.
Thinking about the letter K put me on a quest for a kyrielle. The kyrielle didn’t come to me, but a katauta did. Now I’m not really sure how a katauta is different from a haiku. It is a Japanese form with 5,7,5 or 5,7,7 syllable count. The word katauta means half poem. So I’m thinking if a kyrielle is not singing to me today, then maybe I’ll write a half poem.
Joy surprises me.
The morning amaryllis–
a prayer flag waving…
–Margaret Simon, all rights reserved
Click on the link to see the poem in Haiku Deck.
Created with Haiku Deck, the free presentation app
Why Poetry?
Posted in Poetry, Poetry Friday, Writing, tagged Chris Lehman, I am From, Kevin Hodgson, poetry, TeacherPoets on April 11, 2014| 10 Comments »
For National Poetry Month, Chris Lehman has invited teacher/poets to join together to read, listen, and discuss poetry. Chris posed this question to the group, “Why Poetry?” Inspired by Kevin Hodgson, I tried out Tapestry for my response. Click on the link to view my response.
https://readtapestry.com/s/6Bs7sVEW7/
Earlier in the week, I posted about my writing life responding to fellow blogger/writer Sandra Sarr’s questions. I am From poems have been around for a while and are written in many middle grade classrooms. But I wanted to take a different spin on the I am From and write about where my writing life comes from.
I am from a short story contest in tenth grade.
I won for my row.I am from Dear Diary, “I want to be a writer
if only someone would give me the confidence.”I am from “Where is Papa going with that ax?”
to “Blue is cackling something awful this morning.”
from Children’s Literature class to
the National Writing Project Teacher Institute.I am from retreats, marathons, and critique groups
holding me accountable to find an authentic voice
and make writing a daily practice.I am from pen to paper,
fingers to keyboard,
opening my veins and bleeding
my words,
trusting them to
the world.–Margaret Simon, all rights reserved
Haiku is here
Posted in Poetry, Teaching, tagged Butchart Gardens, Diane Mayr, haiku, Laura Shovan, source poems on April 10, 2014| 8 Comments »
Once again the postcards Laura Shovan sent me, along with Pantone colors, inspire my writing. This postcard shows the Rose Garden at Butchart Gardens in Victoria, B.C., Canada. The postcard states that the gardens were once an abandoned quarry. A quick Google search found that they are still blooming today, “over 100 years in bloom.”
Butchart Garden Haiku
Red fiesta blaze
arching overhead, a wreath
crowns this sanctuary.–Margaret Simon, all rights reserved
On Laura’s blog, writers are sharing their source poems. Diane Mayr wrote about the haiku in this post.
The Writing Process Blog Tour Continued
Posted in Blessen, Blogging, Poetry, tagged ABCs of poetry, ghazal, James McDowell, Laura Shovan on April 9, 2014| 7 Comments »
Why do I write what I do?
I often tell my students that the only way to get good at something is to practice. We all would rather a short cut. I know I would. I wish that I had stuck with writing when I was younger. I wrote often as a teen, and I was bad at it. I unearthed one of these diaries, “I want to be a writer, if only someone would give me confidence.” And as any writer knows, it takes a great deal of confidence. Confidence must come from within, though, not from someone else. But it also takes perseverance. And maybe I don’t have enough of that because I turned to self-publishing for Blessen and for Illuminate. Both projects have brought me great courage. Now I feel more confident in writing for others to read. I trust my voice and allow her to say what she will.
Writing a blog is about connecting. Through this format, I connect to other teachers, poets, authors, and readers.
I write poetry because it’s my passion. My passion comes from falling in love with poets. They are some of the coolest people on this earth. They can say what I meant to say and so much better. I want to be like Mary Oliver when I grow up, walk my dog along the bayou and write beautiful words. I believe the world is more beautiful, more meaningful, more pleasurable because of poetry.
How does my writing process work?
I have different writing processes for different types of writing. For blogging, I just do it. I save a draft, re-read a few times, and publish.
For poetry, I am usually attracted by a prompt. That prompt can come from anywhere: an image, a presenter in Wordlab, a fellow blogger’s post, or the site of a hawk flying over the highway.
Fiction is tougher for me. I have a strong resistance to writing it. Blessen took 6 years. I started it in a writing workshop on fiction writing. I had many starts and stops, months would go by. And now, I have readers asking for her sequel. I just can’t get myself to open the document. What am I waiting for?
Some of my favorite books on the writing life include:
Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott
Writing Down the Bones by Natalie Goldberg
One Writer’s Beginnings by Eudora Welty
Views from a Window Seat by Jeannine Atkins (Reading presently and love how it feels like having coffee with a best friend.)
My National Poetry Month commitment is to write a poem a day using ABCs of forms, techniques, and tools. Today is brought to you by the letter G for ghazal. (pronounced “guzzle”) I am writing my ghazal in a form borrowed from a poet-friend, James McDowell. He writes using three line stanzas rather than the traditional couplet. This ghazal form is credited to Robert Bly and is called a ramage to the Mideastern ghazal, or American ghazal. “In its classic form, each stanza stands alone–has its own landscape, so to speak–and the theme of the poem is never stated. So the reader has much more to do than he would be used to in the contemporary English poem. When the ghazal has its full development, each stanza in a given poem ends with the same word.”
I wrote this loosely formed ghazal to a postcard sent to me by Laura Shovan. It ends with the Pantone color candy pink.
…candy pink sky
Purple-tipped clouds stroke the air
while the red-tailed hawk soars high,
a child points to azure sky.Clipping waves ride the ocean
cradle the rocking schooner
air balloons a sail through sky.Creator draws a straight line
separates water from air,
holds horizons of dazzling sky.I am not old enough to
remember how war feels,
bombs exploding erase sky.Heaven is here in colors.
Our eyes can see the rainbow
when the sun chases storms from the sky.Every story has its lesson,
the one for Margaret is this:
Throw confetti to the wind.
Celebrate a candy pink sky.–Margaret Simon, all rights reserved
Elocution
Posted in Poetry, Teaching, Writing, tagged elocution, Kenn Nesbitt, soundcloud on April 7, 2014| 5 Comments »
E is for Elocution. My younger students are preparing for elocution, memorizing and reciting a poem of choice. They tend to select funny poems, and one of the funniest kid poets is Kenn Nesbitt. Erin picked out “I Think I’m Related to Big Foot” and memorized it quickly. I recorded her little 2nd grade voice reciting the poem. I love the giggles at the end. She can’t keep from laughing. She also has very large dimples that make her even more adorable.
I think I’m related to Bigfoot,
though nothing has ever been proved.
I sort of suspect he’s a cousin,
just seven or eight times removed.Read the rest of the poem here.
If you use Safari as a browser, you may not be able to hear the Soundcloud. Linda Baie found the solution here: http://help.soundcloud.com/customer/portal/articles/1464535-why-can-t-i-hear-tracks-using-safari-
Thanks, Linda.
DigiLit Diamante
Posted in Digital Learning, Poetry, Teaching, Writing, tagged diamante poems, Interactive, Pic Stitch, Read Write Think on April 6, 2014| 10 Comments »
This beautiful wisteria vine grows outside my bedroom window. I think I write a poem about it every year. Today for DigiLit Sunday, I am posting a collage made with Pic Stitch. One of my favorite teacher sites is Read, Write, Think. Supported by two amazing organizations, International Reading Association and National Council for Teachers of English, this site offers a wealth of literacy-based lesson plans. I also love the interactive applications available. I made a diamante poem on a Read, Write, Think Interactive. For students, the app works well because it prompts them for each word. The form for a diamante creates a diamond shape with 7 lines:
Title
Two adjectives
Three -ing words
A phrase that connects title to ending word (antonym or synonym)
Three -ing words
Two adjectives
Ending noun, antonym or synonym
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