This weekend I was invited to read at a festival in Arnaudville, a small town about 40 miles north of New Iberia. The drive to Arnaudville along Highway 31 follows the curving Bayou Teche. Years ago, I drove this same highway to a fiction writing workshop. It was in this workshop that I wrote the first chapter of Blessen. The workshop took place in NuNu’s, an arts collective with a performance area and a cafe in the back. The building sat on a high ridge near the bayou. A few years ago, the place burned. Now Nunu’s is housed down the highway in a large old lumber company building. Walking into the place, you step back in time on long leaf pine floors and high ceilings. You look out onto endless rice fields. I felt a sentimental connection to this birthplace of my first novel. And it was here that I connected with new friends who write.
Clare Martin organized the event in conjunction with the Fire and Water Festival “Le Feu et l’Eae.” (All festivals in South Louisiana have French names.) She titled the readings, “Words of Fire, Words of Water.” I felt privileged to be among the readers. Clare read from her recent book of poetry, Eating the Heart First. I felt an immediate connection to this woman who has turned her grief into beautiful poetry. Talking to her after the reading, I shared something about not expecting to sell many books that day. (I sold 6! A good day!) Her response was so encouraging.
Each success no matter how small in practice of what I love is a lightning strike against the dark.
I loved this! Another woman-writer-friend, Chere’ Coen, (See her blog post about the event.) gave me a Gris Gris bag for courage. And guess what symbol it had on it? A lightning bolt! More synchronicity.

The gris gris bag for courage with Clare’s book of poetry, my prizes from Words of Fire, Words of Water.
Traveling home from the lovely day in Arnaudville, (not to mention, after a delicious catfish po-boy, hazelnut latte, and double-chocolate cake ball) I felt full. I was full of the spirit that brings us life and creativity and art.
This poem by Clare L. Martin moved me to tears:
ICE TO WATER
The hospital room is cool.
There are moths in your breath.Circled in ice, you’re enwrapped in white fire.
Coffee-colored urine drains in a bag.I swab your lips with lemon glycerin.
Your pulse beeps loss. I buzz a nurse out of the void.I cannot watch you die.
The doctor scowls at my cowardliness.Stunted from birth, plucked too early—
You were wingless.It took me years to believe it wasn’t my fault
you despaired in an infant’s life.I choose blue for the burial
like the thunderhead in your eyes.The undertaker powders the fine
hairs of your face, seals you in secret.First published in The Dead Mule School of Southern Literature
Reprinted by permission from the author
Such a moving poem. Clare is amazing. And so are you!
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Wow…I loved it and this line was super special, I choose blue for the burial
like the thunderhead in your eyes. xo nanc
Meeting Clare was so special and encouraging. She has turned her raw grief into beautiful poetry. For her book, the epigraph is “Out of sorrow beautiful things may come.”
I was filled with the warmth of your delightful day, until I came upon that haunting poem…the utter sadness of it took my breath away.
I would ditto Tara! What a special poem from the collection!
Thanks everyone for your comments about my poem. It mean so much. ~Clare
I know your talent, and I believe what Clare said about lightning is true for you. The poem is beautiful and touching.