
On Poetry Friday, Amy Ludwig VanDerwater posted on The Poem Farm a slide show created by teacher/author Emily Callahan. Her 4th graders have been writing proverb poems after Amy’s. I shared the slide show with my student Chloe. She was inspired to write a prequel to Ms. Callahan’s students’ prequel poems. Here is her Fanschool page, Prequel Crazy.
Here it sits
Chloe, 6th grade
covered from the rain a chess board
broken into pieces.
I allow access to
the board.
He has found a new home.
I glue it,
I wash it,
I rinse it,
I dry it,
I wrap it up
and drive along a bumpy road
the perfect gift
to my daughter
She asks, ” Where did you dig this up from?”
“One man’s trash is another mans treasure
Maybe you can do the same
Like with a blanket?”
I wrote alongside Chloe. A poem about my sister’s plan to create a quilt from my father’s shirts. I left the last line blank so I could make it a prequel to Chloe’s. We enjoyed this playful poem making. Thanks, Amy and Emily!
“One man’s trash is another man’s treasure”
The girl sees patterns,
Margaret Simon, draft
pictures in her father’s shirts,
gathered,
sorted,
cut,
stitched
into a quilt of many colors,
into a memory of many hugs,
into a dream of everlasting rest.
She sees more than anyone
a life lived as a husband, a father,
a doctor, an artist, a friend.
She touches every day what he wore,
a treasure in her hands.
Maybe you could do the same.
Maybe with a chess board.
What treasures you both created,I love the rhythm and images, thanks!
So glad I took time to read your blog today…what a gift. So lovely.
Thank you!
Kids appreciate when you write along side them. Chloe must of been tickled pink to have you been inspired by her poem.
What a great way to write something original and yet reference the work of another writer. I enjoyed both poems and the images they create.
Oh my goodness. These gave me the best kind of beautiful shivers. This really is how the world works, isn’t it…when the world is working in the best way. We all learn and share from each other. I adore these and am going to keep all of them together. Thank you. (Off to share with Emily!) xo
They were such fun to write. Thanks to Emily for the inspiring slide show!