This painting by my friend, artist Melissa Bonin, was exhibited at the Acadian World Congress in 2019 in Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada. When Melissa posted this photo of her art on Instagram, I was inspired to ask permission for our ekphrastic poetry this week.
Did you experience the eclipse? The experience was exciting for everyone. Although there were clouds and rain, a few times the sun peeked out and we were able to view it. My students were fascinated.
Every day we
Margaret Simon, draft
Come closer to
Learning our lesson.
I stand in awe
Pretending to feel
Safe on our fragile
Earth.
Please write a small poem in the comments. Encourage other writers with your responses.
Hi Margaret, What beautiful artwork by Melissa. Thanks to her for sharing it! I like the “fragile Earth” in your poem. It is always good to be reminded. I tried a trinet today.
Halo
Umbra folding
Light around
Magical dance of moon and sun
New celestial feats eclipse our understanding
Ooh ahh
Awestruck, afraid
Certainly ensorcelled
I wrote this form and your poem in my notebook. I love a good form. I love your word choices. Thanks.