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In Leo’s world, a dog leash becomes a mountain climber’s harness. A mallet for the xylophone: his pickaxe. A peg board full of colorful pegs is a birthday cake for you. He sings “Happy Birthday to Momma.” She smiles then blows. We are all players in Leo’s world.
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On Fridays with my 6th grade gifted kids, we unpack a poem. We discuss everything from form to figurative language, assign tone and theme, and write a poem in response. This is my favorite lesson of the week. The Promethean Board with the annotation tool makes it even better.
Yesterday we focused on Irene Latham’s spring poems. She posts a video each week designed for homeschoolers, but it works for me, too. This week we watched this video:
Using Irene’s Art Speak Padlet, we located the poems she highlighted and selected one to unpack. My first group chose “because every day is a symphony in spring.” So many things to see, imagery, personification, word choice, rhyme…
When yellow rings, green cannot await its return.
As white fades in discord,
yellow rings. Once again
as purple, pink orange, and red splash the fields.
Jaden, 6th grade
When green season arrives,
the rainbow comes out from every direction and all around you.
Red triangles grow with yellow spots on green string,
orange sky falls and the orange sky rises.
Yellow lights shine through the heavy white marshmallows,
green spikes poke out of the ground.
The sky’s blue falling down in may,
with purple and pink petals that have been waiting for this season.
Green season, green season, full of delight and color.
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I signed up to do an exchange for Spark Art #50 with my friend Inkling Linda Mitchell. Linda creates wonderful collages, so I asked her to do the exchange with me. She sent me a collage and I sent her a poem. She was charged with creating a collage from my poem and me with creating a poem from her collage. Fun, right? It is fun when you are playing with a friend you know will be respectful of your work and who does good work herself.
The links to our exchange on the Spark website are here and here.
I am sharing my poem process that responded to this collage.
collage by Linda Mitchell
The first thing I noticed was the moon. I wrote the title first, “Moonlight Sonata” and played Beethovan’s Sonata for inspiration. I noticed the foreign words. I asked Linda about the flowers, but she didn’t know what they were. I decided they were edelweiss. I got stuck, though, and decided to use a poem I had written for Laura Shovan’s February project and combine it with the work I was doing on responding to the collage. I don’t usually do this, and it created a level of mystery to the poem. And I’m OK with that.
Moonlight Sonata
Moon, wild orb nightly shining high above the oak trees. Your pull breaks waves and concrete where oak roots rise like bread, yeast pressing our foreign earth.
How can you feel sadness if you’ve not known joy?
When the edelweiss blooms, we breathe in sweet scent, welcome Spring and sing praise for your goodness, Moon.
We push on and on until, like you, the flower, the oak we find our light and shine.
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Waking up this early Thursday I didn’t know what I should write. Daily slicing is a good discipline, but I am not as motivated this year as I remember being in the past. Who knows why. Thank goodness this is a community full of ideas for writing, so after reading Elisabeth’s post which was inspired by Hannah, I decided to do Three Things I’m Thankful for Thursday.
French Press Coffee
French Press Coffee: I needed a new coffee routine because my Keurig has been acting up, so I bought a French Press. Now I grind beans, heat water, pour over, press and create a fresh cup of coffee for my morning latté. Always frothed oak milk and a pottery mug!
2. Flowers on my morning walk: Azaleas are blooming. A sure sign of spring!
Azaleas in my front yard.
3. Sisters Text: Almost every day my three daughters and I exchange a text in a group. Last night we were talking about the upcoming wedding of my niece, their cousin. My youngest daughter was having dinner with my grandson, her nephew and sent this photo.
Martha wrote, “I’m on a date but he just called me Sophie so it’s not going well.”
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March is the season for clover. It’s popping up on lawns, in fields, everywhere. I love remembering my childhood in clover, sitting with friends and weaving long chains of clover flowers into crowns, necklaces, veils, anything a princess may need. Clover enhanced my play as a child growing up in Mississippi. I can still smell the freshly mown clover.
Clover by Margaret Simon
Kim Douillard wrote on her blog recently that a colleague of hers described haiku as “in one breath.” I love that thought and encourage you to try a breath of a haiku about clover, spring, childhood, whatever comes to mind. Leave a small poem in the comments and write encouraging responses to other writers.
Breath of fresh clover becomes a princess crown in a field of wonder
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FaceTime with my grandchildren. Dinnertime of salmon, rice, and beans. Leo gives me a virtual taste of an animal cracker. But the best gift of all was Stella (15 months) saying “Mamére!”
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At this hour… Charlie paces waiting for a walk. I slowly sip my morning smoothie, (don’t have my appetite back). Leisurely read other slices finding inspiration and community. I worry about my students today as I take another day to recover. My kitchen counter is covered with a variety of medicines. I know this too shall pass.
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I have volunteered to write for Poetic Justice: Distant Learning.
Poetic Justice’s mission is to offer restorative writing and creative arts programs to individuals who are incarcerated in women’s prisons and jails.
Our vision is to offer opportunities for healing and growth by holding space to process trauma and rewrite personal narratives to transform the story of incarceration.
This week’s writing prompt was to write about a favorite room. The prompt involved comparing objects in the room with animals. For me, I wrote about the animals in the room. I read a quote from an article about Ukrainian refugees in National Geographic. The quote became interspersed into my poem. I will send this poem to my writing partner and hope for a response. I haven’t heard from her yet, but I am assured that I should keep writing anyway.
The Living Room
“We don’t need much,” said one refugee Lidiya Ivanenko. “A warm corner is enough.”
A warm corner is enough, where a red fleece blanket with holes the dog chewed covers my bare legs. This warm space is my respite from a war-torn world, from sound of sirens, from calling chores.
The white cat plays in the corner jumping for elephant ear leaves. She darts away like lightning then back in a flash kneading the blanket purring, bunting my hand.
We don’t need much. We long for safety, for the warmth of a room that says you belong here.
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I considered not writing today, taking a sick day because I am sick. I’ve had a cold and cough (Covid negative) for a week. This morning I decided to go to Urgent Care, and they have fixed me up with a steroid, cough medicine, and antibiotic. Excuse me while I cough.
I hate being sick. Does anyone really like feeling bad? No. But I can still be grateful.
For a cup of tea, and my dog next to me.
A soft place to lay, a comfortable place to stay.
Gratitude still owns my heart when all else seems to fall apart.
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Here we are again at another first Friday of the month. Since it’s Slice of Life Challenge month, this is a dual post. It was my turn to choose a challenge for my writing group, the Inklings. In my classroom, we are writing responses each day to a quote. I challenged my fellow Inklings to find a favorite quote and write a poem. Form was optional.
I am pulling a poem from the February project for Laura Shovan’s birthday. The prompt came from Ruth Lehrer who posted a video of Theo Janson’s Wind-Powered Sculptures. Fascinating. And the same day I saw a Madeleine L’Engle quote in my Instagram feed. I think there was also an influence of form from a poem-of-the-day, but I can’t remember which one. Muses, muses everywhere.
“Believing takes practice” Madeleine L’Engle
If believing takes practice then wind plays with swirling moss hanging in the trees practicing for inevitable storms holding on for the ride to come.
Tell yourself you believe over & over again like the Dutch artist who preserves the beach by creating beach animals walking believing so when midnight comes vacant empty of moon or stars, you can reach out & touch the heart of the lonely and bring them back to love.
Margaret Simon lives on the Bayou Teche in New Iberia, Louisiana. She is a retired elementary gifted teacher who writes poetry and children's books. Welcome to a space of peace, poetry, and personal reflection. Walk in kindness.