William Carlos Williams’ poetry has something to teach us about imagery and noticing the ordinary. His famous poem about the wheelbarrow describes a specific image. My students immediately imagined the setting as a farm. Using magnetic poetry words, we found images to create our own “So Much Depends Upon” poems.
The fifth graders are in state testing this week. They test on computers. Since my classroom is in a corner one of the computer labs, I had to find another place to teach. It was a gorgeous spring day, so we went outside to the garden. Kaia wrote this magnetic poem:
So much depends upon
a misty garden
spring smell symphony
near the white sea.
We were looking around the garden and found four monarch caterpillars eating the milkweed. Kaia talked about all she was learning in science about the caterpillars. Gathering words from the air (not using any toys), I wrote the following poem:
So much depends
upon
the tall
milkweed
dotted
with sunspots
feeding
hungry caterpillars
in
the school garden
You can read more student poems at our Kidblog site.
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Reflections on the Teche 