I love the surprises of spring. Every year some flower that I don’t expect appears and delights me. This year there is a clump of iris in my front flower bed. I don’t remember so many of them blooming at once. On the back deck, a shasta daisy has popped up out of a pot. Spring surprises.
Holly tweeted a call for Spiritual Journey topics. She chose the word “rejuvenation.” We were suggesting words like renew and rebirth. All of these words speak to these new surprises in my yard. A synonym poem seemed in order. I also wanted to play with a repeated word, “there,” because I feel like I am pointing to these sweet surprises of new life. Look, over there, see what I see.
There the renewal of light in trees
illuminates tones of green.
Outside the store, a sign
“Spring colors are in”There a refreshing scent
Rain hangs heavy on
jasmine, sweet oliveThere renovating time–early rising–
that expectant darkness
when prayers are silent.There restoring my soul
from under the heavy blankets
listening to the music
spill in from the window.–Margaret Simon
Dear Margaret, not only do we have rhyming middle names, I am also an early riser who loves the “expectant dark.” In fact, I got in from the airport late last night, and the thing that was #1 priority this morning was to wake early and take a walk. Rejuvenation doesn’t have to be big to be big. xo
I like the repeated “There”! Spring brings so many lovely surprises. We’re having a beautiful spring, and it is good for the soul. I replied to your comment over on my blog. I’m sorry to have taken you by surprise. 😦
Just lovely, Margaret. I love that final part “Listening to the music/spill in from the window”. Gorgeous!
I love the “there” which anchors the mood of this poem, Margaret. Lovely poem!
Beautiful, Margaret. I love that we were both thinking about “listening to the music/spill in from the window” today.